My first full sleeve in progress

Any advice/critique would be highly appreciated.
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Thank you!

Would be nice with some info. Machine, ink, needles, time, what was the experience like. That sort of thing.

I use Elite pen, this piece was done with 5 linear, some different magnums and round shaders. I m trying many different techniques. Those parts have been done in four sessions about 3-5 hours. I m still gonna continue, obviously. It is very kind of this guy, that he went for this risk and he fully trust me, however I haven't done a lot of shadings before. I started with tattooing about 1 year and half ago. Anyway I m really enjoying this work, but I still know, there is a lot of things to improve. This is why I m asking for real critique.
(Sorry for my english, It is not very good.)

From these photos this looks like work from many pros here in iceland... i say "these photos" because i havent seen them up close. But i think this is a really good job.

Adalheidurbj said:

From these photos this looks like work from many pros here in iceland... i say "these photos" because i havent seen them up close. But i think this is a really good job.

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Thanks

Technique wise I agree with Adalheidurbj , it's hard to really comment, because of no close ups on photos. I know from my own photos that it's easy to make it look so much better when showing a tattoo from a distance ? Not saying you're doing it on purpose!!

The silhouette of the man standing looks somewhat cartoonish. No big deal, but by judging from the rest I figure you could have done it more on the same level as the rest

But as far as I can see from these photos it looks very good ???