Wallaceinked
Basic
A couple I've done during the last 3 months of my apprenticeship
Some of my work so far
- Starter Wallaceinked
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I like these.....especially the Stitch one....solid colour packing...I have always found it hard to pack the pastel type colours...light blue and pinks...you've done well with this one.
I'm not liking the butterfly skull as much, some of the lines are shaky and some double passes and I'm thinking that the black isn't packed as solid as it could be.
I love the concept of the mad rabbit thingy but as with the butterfly one, some lining is inconsistant and I saw a couple of lines that didn't join up .....I'm sure your mentor would have told you all of this (well, I'm hoping he has) It also looks like it may have been rushed a little, as in you needed to get it done within a time frame and the stipple shading in the rabbit needs to graduate a bit...it's too consistant in darkness ....needs to go from dark dots to light...whip that needle out instead of keeping it the same depth in the skin.
Hope you don't mind this critique.
I'm not liking the butterfly skull as much, some of the lines are shaky and some double passes and I'm thinking that the black isn't packed as solid as it could be.
I love the concept of the mad rabbit thingy but as with the butterfly one, some lining is inconsistant and I saw a couple of lines that didn't join up .....I'm sure your mentor would have told you all of this (well, I'm hoping he has) It also looks like it may have been rushed a little, as in you needed to get it done within a time frame and the stipple shading in the rabbit needs to graduate a bit...it's too consistant in darkness ....needs to go from dark dots to light...whip that needle out instead of keeping it the same depth in the skin.
Hope you don't mind this critique.
Wallaceinked
Basic
- Starter
- #3
Some more I've done
Wallaceinked
Basic
- Starter
- #4
Wallaceinked
Basic
- Starter
- #5
Wallaceinked
Basic
- Starter
- #6
Thankyou for the feedback, it is always good to get other people's opinions as a fresh pair of eyes always helps
Just saw the new pics you put up mate.....fantastic colour packing on the Smurfette....Blues and yellows are always hard....as for the rest, they looked good until I clicked on them, then the image enlarged and the lining came into view....you need to concentrate on your lining more, I could see lots of double pass lines and inconsistant depth ( or could be your hand speed combined with machine speed) ....I have found that putting your photos of your tattoos on to a computer and then enlarging the image will show you more and give you an understanding of where you are going wrong.....also just doing line tattoos with minimal shading tends to bring the focus onto any bad lining there is. That line tattoo of the fox (I think it is) is not good...to my eye anyway
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